I have a friend, who reads a lot but doesn’t write very much, who gets really irritated with me whenever we discuss books. She claims I’m a snob; she doesn’t understand why I can’t just “relax and and enjoy the book.”
I do enjoy books. Reading is my absolute favorite thing to do when I’m not studying or writing. The difference between my friend and me, though, is that as a writer, every book that I read helps me to hone my craft and my art. It’s not that she doesn’t read well, it’s just that she doesn’t write, and so doesn’t read like a writer.
A writer should not read passively. When a book is really, really good, I might lose myself in it, but later, when the book is done, I always go back to try to identify just what it was the author did that made his/her book so absorbing. And when a book is really, really bad, I’m always tempted to put it down and stop torturing myself, but instead, I try to identify just what it is that makes that particular book so unreadable.
So I’ve begun keeping a notebook, a reading journal, in which I jot down my thoughts about what I’m reading at any given moment. There are a few key elements that I pay special attention to when I read:
- Plot. I have a hard time with plotting, sometimes, and I think that the best way to learn how to do it effectively is by seeing what works (and what doesn’t) in someone else’s writing. How does the author move his/her story from point A to point B? Do the characters actively move the story along? Does something external (outside the characters’ control) happen that the characters have to react to?
- Characterization. When I read a book in which I feel that I really get to know a character, I try to identify the cues that the author gives me about the character’s personality, motivation, background, etc. How much of the character’s personality controls the progress of the novel?
- Dialogue. Does the dialogue feel authentic? What kind of tags does the author use in dialogue? How much slang/idiom do the characters use, and how much formal speech? How does the author differentiate characters through dialogue?
- Language. This is especially important to me; the books that I like the best all employ language in such a way that it emphasizes the meaning of a story, the differences between characters, the mood or the setting. It doesn’t have to be lyrical or poetic; it just has to achieve an effect.
- Setting. How does the author evoke a sense of place? What details does he/she use to make the setting come alive? How, when and where does the author insert these details? In a good novel, the setting can be a character in and of itself; how does an author achieve this?
Most importantly, though, a writer must read, and read a bit of everything. It’s how we know what’s being published currently, what’s been done to death, what’s fresh and new, what works and what doesn’t. Just as a doctor or lawyer does research to stay current in his field, so must a writer.
And, too, read because you enjoy it. Writing makes a great excuse for reading.
Thank you for this very useful, thoughtful post. I always lose myself in books I like, and I toss the ones I don’t. I keep trying to train myself to read in order to learn how to improve my own fiction, but I always forget. These are good, concrete suggestions.
You and I are cut from the same cloth! Years back I used to read just to read (and there is nothing wrong with that,) but it’s probably been a few years where I’ve concentrated on reading ‘good’ books.
I’m mostly sticking to Pulitzer Prize winners or National Book award winners. I do the same thing…try to identify how a passage made me feel and what words made me feel that way and take notes.
The duty of a writer is to not only write, but to read and discern. A discerner of secrets! yeah! I like that! (I’m not even sure if that’s a proper word..better check that!
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peace,
P
You know, I’m with you on this to some degree. I do like to analyse books to see what make them successful but to me it seems to boil down to two things: either they have very compelling characters or a very compelling premise.
As you said in a previous post, the rest is craft. The mechanics. Which I suppose I don’t pay that much attention to unless they are badly executed.
Although, when it comes to movies I can’t help myself. Rarely, can I go see a film without watching and predicting the plot and outcomes. Perhaps it’s more obvious with films for me, I don’t know.
WC